Last Kiss

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Goodbye and farewell, 
bon voyage and have
a happy landing. Break
a leg, break a heart
by leaving, end the best
kiss in the solar system
as if the man on the moon
fell to earth. Like

that.
  
allets

04-12-15
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Author's Notes/Comments: 

Bowie was the Man Who Fell To Earth. :D
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hopelessly-candid's picture

This is beautifully sad...but

This is beautifully sad...but also somehow relieved... like the loss of someone you love but you're thankful that they left... because it was for the best... or that was just my interpretation at least xP.... i loved it!

allets's picture

Yes

Good interpretation. (just found comment - sorry for delay). How are U? - Stella


 

 

MajesticDravon's picture

awesome

Well written.  It is beautiful.


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I am an artist of words as well as paints.

allets's picture

Thanks For The Visit

Glad you found it .a worthy read. It means lots to me~slc~


 

 

DesertDreamer's picture

Someday

Someday one of these poems will be dedicated/inspired by me..... Someday.



also, amazing read. New fave.


~~We can fade away together one dream at a time.~~

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I Just Talked To Bishu

who is exploring new writers beyond his "relationships". I call that inspiring...Thanks for the read. ~slc~
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roseblossoms's picture

I am honored to have

I am honored to have inspired!

Thank you for the link back to

my poem! It's been gathering dust

on moon beams!

 

Thanks again

allets's picture

yawelcum

and U rock! ~slc~
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bishu's picture

Big Grin..... Not your real style however But I like it

Respected Madam Allets......................................................................... Smile


©bishu 

 

allets's picture

I

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have a real style? Hmmmmm. I shed it like skin, flakes off if I don't wash, goes to rusty and dry unless reinvented and turned inside out occasionally. Really. I have a style? A real one? Laughter and hugz Bish - U Rock! ~lady star, allets.
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