moving

From Dream to Dream

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Any constructive criticism would be welcome :)

View mooncruxcollision's Full Portfolio

Dreams begin to end

Author's Notes/Comments: 

criticism?

View mooncruxcollision's Full Portfolio

Forget

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Comments Appreciated :)

View invisibird's Full Portfolio

My strife filled life

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is my first poem. I wrote it because I recently moved from a place that I live for eleven years. I have become depressed and began questioning what the point of life is. I know it's not that great and it probably sounds like rambling. But it is what is on my heart and I had to find a way to get it out. And the way my heart found was poetry.

View jenigirl10's Full Portfolio

Green

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Written 4/19/09.  April Challenge Day 16: color poem.

View k4horses4ever's Full Portfolio