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You can watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/KAZZLooCE20

A poem about Judas' betrayal of Christ.  You can watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/QVjB3_Y8j4Q

Nothing else I can add. It says it all...

New one just finished.  Would love to see some comments on it. 12-13-22

Reedited 12.06.2022 [22:25];11.23.2022 [09:09]; 11.22.2022 [20:38]

1.  Prior changes have been made to this poem at an earlier time (but not enumerated them all at this moment).

2.  Changed the word "mukha" to "wangis" instead (just to avoid redundancy or the word being doubled in my verses).

3.  (11.23.2022)  Omitted a comma (placed formerly in following line: "o, baka.." (unedited version)

4. (12.06.2022) the line "parang itong asul sa taas," was changed to the grammatical "para itong asul sa taas,"