Sticky Notes on the Bus

The color of a spark ignites a fire,
but the color can not be explained-Color me Hope and label it Faith.

Sticky notes on the bus say "YOU must be the flame"
then cue in the Water to cool off the tongues, How did it taste??
So close to all feeling the same, these elemental thoughts and the immature games.
What have they brought these superstitions of ours??
....A breath of life! Because just to breathe is to believe that, that which gives us life
Is that which we can not see!
Sticky notes on the bus igniting Blessings for all to read but picked up by only me.
Connecting that which we forget-with the help from someone we don't know saying you can Believe!

Agents of Beauty! know not the mechanics of the mind yet create the most inspiring thoughts.
Messengers of the King know of the Heart they have never seen but Love the Word Love the Lord and everything and everything in between
Speak the Universal Language of signs and ask not what they mean.
For the sweet Freedom to post a note or speak ones Hope can one day set us all Free
Sticky Notes on the Bus

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Maktub
Poem by: Leonardo Orellana TheAlchemist
Written:31/01/12
Special thanks to the Angel who left me such a beautiful note on the bus this morning!

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SSmoothie's picture

You have a wonderful sense of imagery

The connections you make with the objects and the meaning are wonderful! My kind of post it poem! Really enjoy your take, my kind of poetry! Beautiful message too! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

TheAlchemist's picture

I always enjoy reading your

I always enjoy reading your replies thank u!! i wrote this one with a lot of feel i'm glad it can be seen

SSmoothie's picture

I guess it's a win/win situation!

;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Invisibird's picture

Gorgeous

That was a fantastic read, the language you used was truly captivating. I love it!!!


-Lala

TheAlchemist's picture

thank u!! i was hoping to

thank u!! i was hoping to hear some feed back before calling it a night! most appreciated