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Unchangeable
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2016
At sunrise I watched you leaning
against the west side of the hill
Just as lost as I am
We’re unchangeable,
scared half to death
by things we can’t understand
And my feet still pound
against black and white pavements
that bury the yesterdays we left behind
But at sunrise I saw you
staring at the moon
hoping this world stays unchangeable
It was so long ago,
it’s tomorrow and forever
and the echoes in between
We’re unchangeable,
running backwards
smoky ashes rekindled again and again
I won’t ever burn for you
like the waves on the shore
but I’ll watch that sunrise too
I’m the one you
won’t ever love
and can’t ever lose
"But at sunrise I saw
"But at sunrise I saw you
staring at the moon"...
these lines got to me im not sure why... made me see something beautiful and sad
awesome write!
Thank you!
Thank you!
*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james
Unchangeable
Many lovely images here, I feel them all.
Thank you!
Thank you!
*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james
Awesome poem, reminds me of
Awesome poem, reminds me of Misery Signals (huge compliment!)
Thank you!
Thank you!
*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james