It's You

It's your voice I want to hear
The last thing at night
It's your arms I want to hold
As we turn off the lights

It's your lips I want to taste
When I shut down my sight
I want to smell your sweet breath
As we cuddle together tight

It's you I want to be with
For the rest of my life
You are the world, the love for me.

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MisterSuperstar's picture

aww, very sweet

aww, very sweet

AquariusMoon's picture

This is my favorite part.

This is my favorite part. "It's your lips I want to taste When I shut down my sight". How romantic to have your wife as your muse.

 

ramonathompsont's picture

I've felt this. Trying not to

I've felt this. Trying not to feel it for him anymore no matter how much I'm still in love.

ramonathompsont's picture

Simply yet lovely. True love

Simply yet lovely. True love summed up in only a few lines. May it last forever and beyond.

Morningglory's picture

This is the sweetest love

This is the sweetest love poem, Sugarbear.


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Reminiscent's picture

Well-written poem! I like it.

Well-written poem! I like it.


There are three things all wise men fear: the sea in storm, a night with no moon, and the anger of a gentle man.


Heroes are not meant to survive.

 

snugglebunny920's picture

Hmph my breath is always

Hmph my breath is always minty fresh! It helps to brush your teeth more than once a day then it is!

I love you baby! I can't wait to put this one in the frame with the rest of the poems you've wrote me! heart

nkorinko's picture

Its got alot of potential.

Its got alot of potential. Something I think you should consider adding on to. Also the line "smell your sweet breath" I dont know to many people who WANT to smell someones breath


The only problem with the story carved on your chest, is its hard to read when your missing your ribs..