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Whispering Colors
I've been whispering to these colors
As they've been whispering to me.
Oh how I would imagine,
How they simply could be.
Kiss me!
Kiss me!
They say,
as they whisper to me.
Us,
and only us!
They plead,
as they whisper to me.
They conceive me,
into believing,
what they want to be,
They consume me.
They twist me,
They turn me,
into a world of believing,
Oh, they conceive me,........
Take me,
into this fantasy,
into this place,
that is glazed, with daze.
Make me,
into a radiant whole being,
because seeing is believing,
oh, they conceive me,.........
Take me,
Make me,
do what you believe,
oh, I will conceive,..........
Consume me,
and move me,
into this fantasy,
Oh conceive,.........
Consume me,
become me,
make me believe,
what you want to see,
Consume me,
my body, my soul and my spirit,
Consume me,
You are my body,
Now, you've become me,
whisper to me,
oh, you fantasies,
Whisper to me.
Wonderful! Well done
Congratulations!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I've added on, a lot!!!!
I've edited this. At first it was only, the first four lines. Then, just now, I thought I'd do a little more to it. But then after i added a little bit, I couldn't stop!!! My mind was racing, and Ideas were bursting. Now I am very proud that it is a longer, detailed, poem. And I'm so happy that I edited and did more to this! Now, I think this is one of my favorite poems!
Time.
I think you could probably make this into something more if you spent a little more time on it. It's good though.