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JOURNAL # 41

careful, he said
two hearts can be
a train wreck
tender flesh
unacceptable
collateral damage
the momentum of inertia
your voice in my ear
a veritable life changer
your clever come hither
that tone of sincere love
so plaintive now in your eyes
come let us rebel
against the laws of society
for gravity shall never again
be our friend
I am yours entirely
my dear, lovely mad, in love man
that I am so be careful not
look again
we are wed
no train wreck after all
just a life time's journey
on the rails............
(Sept. 30, 2014 345am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Was in a rather metaphoric mood and I believe this poem demonstrates that rather well.

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Melissa in a metaphoric mood Nicey for 4222 Respected PWP

Melissa in a metaphoric mood Nicey for 4222 Respected PWP.I'll run out of time and words by 400 I'm sure ~A guided poetlikumissile by PWP aka M~ Caution please ignore my comments.But as promised I'll NOT delete it -I really dont know if I can call you friend or sister ?~


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since I call you brother bishu then.................

then that should give you your asnwer. nemaste...........M.

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Yes Sister

Yes Sister... Nomoshkar (Bengali) Kamon achen ?(How are you?) Kono notun khobor achhe? (Anything new?) Bhalo thakben (Be well) Smile


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