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your beautiful
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Life goes on You are beautiful in every way no matter
What they say
Know that it is true because of me
I would never lie to you
Your face so soft
And skin so bright
God you are beautiful
I want to hold you tight
With your beautiful heart next to mine
Beating together entwined
Till the end of time
You are beautiful in every way
Do not let anyone say different
I will always see your beautiful face and take in
Every embrace for it is you a beautiful bloom
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comment on the poem guys... (zzzzz ) ... nice tone to the work leo..
JZAcH
very nice flows beautifully :)
very nice flows beautifully :)
Sheesh.. "YOU'RE"-you
Sheesh.. "YOU'RE"-you are--NOT "Your"
arrogance
sanctus your poetry will not make up for your arrogance
You think it is arrogant to
You think it is arrogant to assist people to write CORRECTLY? This is literature, or did you not realize that?
How you say something is
How you say something is important Sanctus. Your advice was correct and helpful, but your tone was arrogant... Why the "sheesh?"
Jason Minton
PostPoems Admin
support@postpoems.org
PS: I didn't "say" anything.
PS: I didn't "say" anything. I wrote my reply. :-) (LOL)
Because one of my pet peeves
Because one of my pet peeves is spelling. I detest incorrect spelling. In simpler terms, it irritates the fuck out of me. But since my advice seems unwanted, as of now I'll cease commenting on anyone's work from this point on. God knows the bulk of the work I spend time reading/commenting upon does not seem to cause the authors to at least have the courtesy to return the favour
thank you all
thank you all for youre comments
Stinker