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Love, Hope, and Magnetic Things
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2017 The trickiest part about expressing love to somebody else
isn't removing the emotions from your heart
isn't finding the right words to say in the moment
...isn't even exposing yourself to their response
it's knowing that no matter the conclusion
what's said cannot be unsaid and
the hope associated with that love will evaporate
no matter what
and that energy evolves from potential
to
kin
et
ic
either invoking a gravitational pull in your direction
or enabling a force field
repelling away like two magnets of the same charge
and when you get older
there's only so much hope left in the repertoire to enable
that's the trickiest part of expressing love to somebody else
Absolutely
Superb! A brilliant analogy poetically!
Bravo!
Koko
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
thank you once again, I think
thank you once again, I think this one may need a little more work but I'm content with it for now, we'll see
Lots of wisdom in this poem,
Lots of wisdom in this poem, and I applaud your use of the physics metaphor.
Starward
thank you sir for the kind
thank you sir for the kind words, keep writing and take care!
"...and when you get older..."
Older, there is space available to dream for other people, but either you did it or you didn't. Too late to start over - I've tried, body rebelled. To actualize dreams, yes, they fade, and new ones emerge to pull you into the future, unless you are old and the future is short. It's like filling voids, you still can later in life, it just takes so much longer to get to the brim ~(:D)-
absolutely agree, and
absolutely agree, and apologize for such a delayed response, hope you are well