how do you fix something when you don't know what is that's broke

a faint glow of the street light coming through the 
bedroom window as the curtains move in the breeze 
Its a hot August night but I feel cold inside

she don't know I can see the tears in her eyes
she thinks the darkness hides 
all I know is somehow I've faild her again

I'm slowly dying inside while searching 
for answers to unanswerable questions 
how do you fix something 
when you don't know what is that's broke

~ D Donner ~

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allets's picture

How Do You

identify something or someone broken and look at the shards and try to be glue? Some things, some peope fall apart and can not be put togethrr again. Love as hard time. - Stella


 

 

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I'm sure all the Kings Horses

I'm sure all the Kings Horses an all the Kings Men Can't Put Me Back Together 


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

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I wish

I wish we could all be put back together....we could fill the holes with gold. It's an art form! :)

peace ~hopefulwoman


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I'm not sure there's enough

I'm not sure there's enough  Gold in our Galaxy To fill the holes I have sometimes  But it's a nice thought isn't it 


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

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You're right,

We couldn't afford it anyway but we could use anything we want, it's art. We just have to honor the scars, that's all. 


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I've tried writing Happy

I've tried writing Happy thoughts and have come close a couple times but I fear i'm to far away from Never Never Land  


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

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Happy place? Who's that? I

Happy place? Who's that? I write from a place of dissatisfaction that's a general state of being these days. Happiness is a flicker make sure you catch it's warmth when you can. If you don't know what's broke it's not yours to fix. Very relatable piece.  Hugs 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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I feel ya

I don't much write from happy place either. we don't need never never land we need ever ever land of contentment. 


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