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Devotion For Playboy
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Playboy Young girl
Mind full of dreams
Moving too fast, but running too slow
In love with a man who can’t love her back
Because his heart belongs to someone else
But her time is his time
And his mouth is fed
But she waits hungrily
For him to change his mind
When he calls she comes running
When he needs her she’s there
Despite the fact that her heart aches
She waits & she loves
Her desires, her longing, her pain, her hurt...
Is real
Her devotion & her promises to him is her survival
His touch soothes her
His smile melts her
His kiss- damn- his kiss
Now, time & gates keep them apart
But her love can’t fade
Because real love lasts forever
And her love, her desires, her longing....
Is real
Young girl
Heart full of patience
Full of pain
But she will wait for his touch
Weeks, months, years, decades
Forever
This is such a painful place to be. You wrap your talent around this place and portray it so skillfully here, the girl's pain and noble devotion are almost palpable. Well written.
this is great gurl keep them coming
"Her devotion & her promises to him is her survival
His touch soothes her
His smile melts her
His kiss- damn- his kiss"
I really like this poem...sorry about the heartache that inspired it. I look forward to reading more of your work...
J