If you love me, then you would.

 

 

I'm so sorry, but I'm not in love with you.
[I care for you, so no hard feelings, right?]

 

I just don't see myself with you.
[but I don't know, maybe?]

 

I just don't know.
[But no.]

 

 


 

I know without a doubt that I love you.
(although you have hurt me bad)

 

I will continue to love you.
(yes, no matter what)

 

And if you truly loved me.
(then you would)

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I really like this type of

I really like this type of poem and I think you have a good idea going here, if I understand where you are going. I see it as a conversation, but you need to either expose or refine the emotion a bit more. Definitely on the right track!